Themes and Hooks: Give the Audience a Reason to Care
How to freshen familiar themes, handle touchy subjects, and give someone a reason to put on your play
When you send out your play, your first audience isn’t a ticket-buyer in the third row. It’s a director.
Before any audience hears your play, a director has to decide whether it is worth their reputation, their evening, and their actors’ hard work. Directors don’t read a script the way a reviewer reads a novel. They read it looking for conflict that will hold a room. If the story sounds dull or preachy, the director passes, and the play never reaches an audience.
The Familiar Theme: How to Make It Feel New
Strong stories are built on struggles everyone knows: duty against desire, the weight of loyalty, betrayal by an institution, the search for something to believe in. The danger is mistaking a theme that is universal for one that is alive. Lean on stock characters or familiar moral speeches, and a director will know the audience will tune out before the first scene ends.
To make an old theme hit home, come at it from a new angle:
-
Give the other side a real argument.
Don’t stack the deck. If your opponent is just an ignorant bully, the play turns into melodrama. Your main character should face someone whose position makes sense, or who is defending something genuinely worth defending.
-
Show what the ideal costs, not what it says.
Don’t let a character lecture about the theme. Audiences care less about ideals than about what it costs a person to live by them. And remember — here as everywhere — that listeners resent being cheated out of the pleasure of figuring some things out for themselves.
The Touchy Subject: Come In Through a Relationship
If your story deals with a controversial subject, tackling it head-on can put listeners on the defensive. Once they start arguing with the play in their heads, they stop feeling what the characters feel.
The way around this is a kind of Trojan horse: a close human bond that everyone recognizes.
The Hook: Give Someone a Reason to Schedule It
Theater directors, community arts boards, and people who run reading series don’t choose scripts on literary merit alone. They choose plays that fill a date on the calendar, draw a particular audience, or are easy to publicize. Tie your story to something outside the play that people already care about:
| Kind of Hook | What It Means | Why It Helps |
|---|---|---|
| A date on the calendar | Tie the play to a holiday, an anniversary, or an event such as Banned Books Week. | The date comes with its own publicity, and organizations are already looking for something to put on. |
| Local history | Use the region’s own speech, history, customs, or old quarrels. | Historical societies, city arts centers, and libraries look for exactly this. |
| Forgotten people | Put people who are usually overlooked at the center of the story, with dignity and detail. | Audiences who rarely see their own history on stage will seek it out. |
The Strongest Date of All: Christmas
If your story can honestly be set at Christmas, consider it. About nine in ten Americans celebrate Christmas in some form, many as a cultural holiday rather than a religious one. Older people tend to see it as a religious holiday; younger people as a time for family traditions and nostalgia. Either way, it is the one season when every generation goes to the theater together.
The Light in Washington takes this route. It is billed as “A Christmas Play for Voices,” and it is set in the snow in December 1868.
Sources